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"sculptress" poems
Slowly it slides on sub zero waters trying to find a pathway to the sea sheet of pure blue and heaven white lumbers discreetly for aquiline is quite From the top of the world frozen fingers reach down claws frantic on solid ground No religion no sage no saviour just age and the relentless pull of gravity will take it from mountain to the sea This sculptress of valleys and dales and fjords that can be seen for miles travels without sound onward bound By Christos Andreas Kourtis aka NeonSolaris
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Nov 29, 2013
Nov 29, 2013 at 7:53 PM UTC
Glacier
To anyone The warning Beauty is dangerously fascinating as well as the person who it dwells. Therefore, I'm not responsible for your precocious passions either your impossibilities. 1st stranger / The worker A charming smile able to break down the walls around my small heart. So he goes on his own way as far as he feels more alone. He's a charm which, however, lives in the future. Oh he's a machine, leastwise he works at speed of one. 2nd stranger / The sculptress The dissolved melancholy in her round face is extremely rare, because it's similar to mine. So many shapes! So many angles! So many views! So many plans! Oh she suffers of simplicity inside a world so complex. 3rd stranger / The dreamer Eyes of matutinal sky which once stared at me deeply, making me daydream on a folly. A boy who has been abandoned in the desert (in the desert of awareness). A boy who has been found at sea (at sea of unawareness). I envy his young eyes. Mindful eyes to everything and everyone. Eyes with an incredible innocence. Sometimes I'm like him: obsessed with folly, but full of sanity. 4th stranger / The dadaistic The most beautiful gold wires sway in front of me as well as they identify the person to whom they belong. However, I don't know why I've seen her with so much affection. She's nothing to me. She doesn't make sense like this. Perhaps her beauty is somenthing unique (and this is worthy of affection leastwise, of contemplation). 5th stranger / The artist When he speaks, his lips are voluptuous. and when he shuts up, they are just lips. I consider my appreciation somewhat sentimental although it is fatal. I make poetry in pure expression, requiring to intervene or not. I'm anxious as well as anguished and therefore I fall in love externally and internally with his impressionist beauty. Beauty which once I imagined owning with the same feeling which I dedicate him this space from a pretentious poem.
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Jun 18, 2014
Jun 18, 2014 at 1:42 PM UTC
Wonderful
To anyone The warning Beauty is dangerously fascinating as well as the person who it dwells. Therefore, I'm not responsible for your precocious passions either your impossibilities. 1st stranger / The worker A charming smile able to break down the walls around my small heart. So he goes on his own way as far as he feels more alone. He's a charm which, however, lives in the future. Oh he's a machine, leastwise he works at speed of one. 2nd stranger / The sculptress The dissolved melancholy in her round face is extremely rare, because it's similar to mine. So many shapes! So many angles! So many views! So many plans! Oh she suffers of simplicity inside a world so complex. 3rd stranger / The dreamer Eyes of matutinal sky which once stared at me deeply, making me daydream on a folly. A boy who has been abandoned in the desert (in the desert of awareness). A boy who has been found at sea (at sea of unawareness). I envy his young eyes. Mindful eyes to everything and everyone. Eyes with an incredible innocence. Sometimes I'm like him: obsessed with folly, but full of sanity. 4th stranger / The dadaistic The most beautiful gold wires sway in front of me as well as they identify the person to whom they belong. However, I don't know why I've seen her with so much affection. She's nothing to me. She doesn't make sense like this. Perhaps her beauty is somenthing unique (and this is worthy of affection leastwise, of contemplation). 5th stranger / The artist When he speaks, his lips are voluptuous. and when he shuts up, they are just lips. I consider my appreciation somewhat sentimental although it is fatal. I make poetry in pure expression, requiring to intervene or not. I'm anxious as well as anguished and therefore I fall in love externally and internally with his impressionist beauty. Beauty which once I imagined owning with the same feeling which I dedicate him this space from a pretentious poem.
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If I was a blind old woman or a sculptress caked in clay I'd trickle my weathered fingertips over your cheekbones like rain Trace that scar from long ago follow the beaten track my eyes have wandered a million times like a favourite paperback If I was a travelling artist paintbrush aching to echo your face on the empty strip of a canvas your eyes too blue to leave any space I'd paint in glorious yellow those secret acts of kindness your heart uncontrollably glows that cool exterior just a pretence Just the same stumbling tone that falters as you masquerade as just my friend, so well I know that devotion you shine down on my face If I was the woman I want to be I'd twist these words in ink round your wrists but I am just a helpless writer and you are too precious to risk
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Aug 30, 2013
Aug 30, 2013 at 8:14 PM UTC
Sculptress
The Art of Criticism The art of criticism Should consist Of accurate, rich language-ism; Gentleness and witticism, Care and love implicit In a simple, clear expression. Love of th’art it’s writing ‘bout, Love, respect inside and out For author, auth’ress, sculptor, sculptress, Painter, paint-ress, instrumentalist and –ess. Poet, poetess whose full respect he/she/they merit. When I read clichés inherent Such as, “Awesome” “Great” and “Wonderful”, Thoughtless, glib and under-worked; When I read “Like”, “Thumbs up, “Thumbs down I frown. This plea from Ms. Poetic Me, Sincere, considered, justified Is plain ol’ objectivity, Objecting to a lazy critic. A good critique Is not a trick Played out in adjectives and verbs. A worthy critic is superb, Does not disturb Because he values art and artist. The Art of Criticism 6.30.2016 Definitely Didactic; Arlene Corwin
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Jun 30, 2016
Jun 30, 2016 at 11:38 AM UTC
The Art of Criticism
I carve words into bark of vellum as if tree trunk standing pristine and tall. My pen-like tool moves in moment below blue skies lightly peppered with orange clouds. My breath merges with nature while birds echo in serenades that color mind with spiraling visions. I carve as a master with its title passed on from generations inside starlit cosmos. Come, partake in my flourishing garden of verse. And may you be inspired to take a bouquet into the heart.
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Oct 27, 2019
Oct 27, 2019 at 9:42 AM UTC
Poetic Sculptress