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"eckleburg" poems
High up on a hill Like a little castle Windows like the sun T.J. Eckleburg’s eyes Watching down below like the representative eyes of God I can’t write poetry This is a failure Whatever I wonder if the people in that building knew how they’d die I wonder if we all know how we’ll die but we just can’t remember until we’re there I hope my death is like a déjà vu I hope I see this picture when I die And the sky will be the same colour And the ground will be cold and rocky Somewhere in my line of sight there’ll be a building With windows like the eyes of God And I promise not to go into the light But I can’t say it’ll offer the same courtesy Maybe the people inside will be staring at screens or marking little boxes in the shape of my eyes with little x’s They could be talking Maybe, laughing Morbidly joking, “oops there goes another one” While they sip pinot grigio and pretend to be scientists With their degrees bought in the black market Agents of God that even He, Himself decided to write off High up in the sky, watching life unfold like a bad reality TV show God must hate reality TV
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May 29, 2014
May 29, 2014 at 7:55 PM UTC
Windows Like God
In his blue gardens men and girls came and went like moths among the whisperings and the champagne and the stars. but the only one you wanted to see was her “Can’t repeat the past? Why...of course you can!” and so you did. or at least attempted too. but it didn’t work for you now did it, old sport? because the harder you tried to keep up this game the more they rewrote the rules “they’re a rotten crowd” I shouted across the lawn. “you’re worth the whole **** bunch put together!” you fell in love with the girl whose voice was full of money in the valley of ashes. looked at her the way every young girl wants to be looked at a beautiful little fool, she was perfect for you afternoon tea silk shirts stained by her tears your resurrection was born. or so you thought. you were endlessly attempting to recreate a sequel to that summer night in 1945 the kiss the sky that night. your death was almost heroic only you and I know you were doomed from the start “gatsby believed in the green light, the orgastic future that year by year recedes before us. It eluded us then, but that’s no matter - tomorrow we will run faster, stretch out our arms farther...and one fine morning- so we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past.”
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Apr 23, 2018
Apr 23, 2018 at 6:08 PM UTC
observances from the eyes of doctor t.j. eckleburg
1. your mother asks you to make her breakfast 2. she has lived your life two and a half times over she knows everything about the world and you know nothing is what she tells you when she is bending you backward with her voice when she is loud and searing and immediate an avalanche woman bringing boulders to her feet 3. your mother takes up space she attracts she magnetizes you are fighting your way out of her orbit but it is hard you perform elliptical rotations around her and count the seconds between your words and her rage it is a bittersweet spectacle beautiful in its torment like watching a dying star absorb itself: this huge white brilliance, this ricocheting sound, the tears there is no gravity to catch 4. you look at your mother the way she mirrors you in reverse her laugh is your laugh but not your laugh her hair hits her left collarbone the way yours does your right her pain is blue like yours but hers is navy and yours looks like a blue iris when light cuts through it like the eyes of T.J. Eckleburg surveying you as you excavate your feelings all-knowing in their grief 5. your mother is you and she is not-you so peel the grapefruit and cut it in half plate the eggs bring it all to her with coffee the way she likes it cream, no sugar 6. forgive her even though
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Jun 9, 2017
Jun 9, 2017 at 12:38 AM UTC
forgiveness, over easy