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you have the formula A Love Poem Recipe:   Fij = G(Mi x Mj)/Dij. This formula, simplified, means that trade between two markets will equal the size of the two markets multiplied together and then divided by their distance. (The model gets its name from its mathematical similarity to the equation in physics that describes gravitational pull.) ~~~ long ago, swore off the love poem business. lying that this the last poem ever published moan not, statistically, for sure be a heart-infected sick teenager bemoaning/high fiving their  fated status but I don't need to add to that smoldering pile the excellence, the richness, the virtuosity of the formula a metaphor, for the bounty and the risk, in any love affair, thus love needy for a diagrammed explication two markets, soft upon each other, multiply their trade in love and kisses can you kiss her (him) but once? nonsense! saying I love you but once a day, like it was a vitamin, preposterous! no, love expands like a gas (a distant cousin to our formula), filling in the empty spaces, escaping through crevices, spilling, oft filling up the nearby bystanders in love, there is no thing as one touch clicking but one touch reveals the genetic marker, the initial intimacy injection Let the addiction begin! ten thousand grasps, some soft, some hard, upon each other, till fingers go lifelong contented numb desire and affection spread like a positive infection, the curative powers elegiac, but never prosaic and though formulaic think more voltaic and paradisiac electric heaven go forth and scribe you got the secret recipe
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Jun 16, 2018
Jun 16, 2018 at 9:15 AM UTC
Yes Kid, You CAN write love poetry, if...
you have the formula A Love Poem Recipe:   Fij = G(Mi x Mj)/Dij. This formula, simplified, means that trade between two markets will equal the size of the two markets multiplied together and then divided by their distance. (The model gets its name from its mathematical similarity to the equation in physics that describes gravitational pull.) ~~~ long ago, swore off the love poem business. lying that this the last poem ever published moan not, statistically, for sure be a heart-infected sick teenager bemoaning/high fiving their  fated status but I don't need to add to that smoldering pile the excellence, the richness, the virtuosity of the formula a metaphor, for the bounty and the risk, in any love affair, thus love needy for a diagrammed explication two markets, soft upon each other, multiply their trade in love and kisses can you kiss her (him) but once? nonsense! saying I love you but once a day, like it was a vitamin, preposterous! no, love expands like a gas (a distant cousin to our formula), filling in the empty spaces, escaping through crevices, spilling, oft filling up the nearby bystanders in love, there is no thing as one touch clicking but one touch reveals the genetic marker, the initial intimacy injection Let the addiction begin! ten thousand grasps, some soft, some hard, upon each other, till fingers go lifelong contented numb desire and affection spread like a positive infection, the curative powers elegiac, but never prosaic and though formulaic think more voltaic and paradisiac electric heaven go forth and scribe you got the secret recipe
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alliteration delving delusory, a literati shun thy commissions, galore, the line goes around the corner Entrusted. write us a prayer - as if I were thus worthy t'is a delusion which is worse than Illusion my fingers command me - not I, them I scribe inky, they write what they deem the most unfitting fulfilling thy requests more crosses to bear, this Jew has walked the Via Dolorosa then, and again, now oh yes delve delve with archaic ***** turn over earth unsubstantiated long time un~disturbed **"bring us your truths in whatever form they spill from you"** Thus, they command me, Lord **"Go back to living, like it used to be. No more tortured soul to slow you down"** Thus, they command me, Lord sleep restful, feet bathed, Pavorotti  & Pachelbel comforted, let it go, live the fleeting, well, drink the wine, wafer, taste, Jew, but stay away from the confessional don't delve into your own thesaurus when opened, one can vision right through us don't delve in to the recesses thankfully receding, eroding, except for the enlightening flashbacks that stone cold come with no forewarning don't let the sin memories of ancient words, black gold bubble up with the first striking of the blade Delve (excavate your soul deep) Not I did not come this poem to write I did not come to repeat Solomon's poem, nothing new under the sun don't, daunting wish to delve into my delusions, my original sin the deceit the conceit I am unique I am original but let us weave as I best could diagrammed prayers as the sun rises over my eastern river for it the seventh day, the sabbath day, which the commandments commend as the day to remember and *to keep it holy. Six days you shall labor, and do all your work, but the seventh day is a Sabbath to the LORD your God. On it you shall not do any work, you, or your son, or your daughter, your male servant, or your female servant, or your livestock, or the* sojourner *who is within your gates. For in six days the LORD made heaven and earth, the sea, and all that is in them, and rested on the seventh day. Therefore the LORD blessed the Sabbath day and made it holy.* no delving today I will observe thy reader's, all of them my teacher's, commandments rest easy, spill no truths this day but on the new born morrow I shall fresh delve and sin again and write them joyful hymns to sing on the profane workweek, for my torture, my spilled and soiled truths shall be re-presented to joyous comfort and then, I shall sojourn among them
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Mar 22, 2014
Mar 22, 2014 at 7:26 AM UTC
even this sojourner, delving delusory, on the Sabbath, spills not
alliteration delving delusory, a literati shun thy commissions, galore, the line goes around the corner Entrusted. write us a prayer - as if I were thus worthy t'is a delusion which is worse than Illusion my fingers command me - not I, them I scribe inky, they write what they deem the most unfitting fulfilling thy requests more crosses to bear, this Jew has walked the Via Dolorosa then, and again, now oh yes delve delve with archaic ***** turn over earth unsubstantiated long time un~disturbed **"bring us your truths in whatever form they spill from you"** Thus, they command me, Lord **"Go back to living, like it used to be. No more tortured soul to slow you down"** Thus, they command me, Lord sleep restful, feet bathed, Pavorotti  & Pachelbel comforted, let it go, live the fleeting, well, drink the wine, wafer, taste, Jew, but stay away from the confessional don't delve into your own thesaurus when opened, one can vision right through us don't delve in to the recesses thankfully receding, eroding, except for the enlightening flashbacks that stone cold come with no forewarning don't let the sin memories of ancient words, black gold bubble up with the first striking of the blade Delve (excavate your soul deep) Not I did not come this poem to write I did not come to repeat Solomon's poem, nothing new under the sun don't, daunting wish to delve into my delusions, my original sin the deceit the conceit I am unique I am original but let us weave as I best could diagrammed prayers as the sun rises over my eastern river for it the seventh day, the sabbath day, which the commandments commend as the day to remember and *to keep it holy. Six days you shall labor, and do all your work, but the seventh day is a Sabbath to the LORD your God. On it you shall not do any work, you, or your son, or your daughter, your male servant, or your female servant, or your livestock, or the* sojourner *who is within your gates. For in six days the LORD made heaven and earth, the sea, and all that is in them, and rested on the seventh day. Therefore the LORD blessed the Sabbath day and made it holy.* no delving today I will observe thy reader's, all of them my teacher's, commandments rest easy, spill no truths this day but on the new born morrow I shall fresh delve and sin again and write them joyful hymns to sing on the profane workweek, for my torture, my spilled and soiled truths shall be re-presented to joyous comfort and then, I shall sojourn among them
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**For Sheron, On Our Seventh Anniversary: Bound and Boundless** ~~~ *different shaped, a square peg, a round hole, and yet, the carpenter is pleased two planes, different shaped, yet overlaying, occupying conjoined space, angular symmetry and yet, the geometrist is satisfied can* bound and boundless, *fully opposing notions, incontrovertible, yet be in pleasing poetic combination? how can it be, two bonded, distinct spheres contoured with crossover bordered blended boundaries exceed aligned, beyond merest connecting, overlapping, intersecting two circles electronically collide, venn diagrammed to share, programmed unknowingly for creating a big bang of a harmonious, simultaneous new star creation this mystery, this poem, its resolution~solution, comes to the poet late in life, yet contented, believing, it is a far, far better thing that he does now, than never life and love living in unison, transforming, deserving of a unique discrete, le nom est l'unite perhaps you are thinking, this poem, a failed attempt, neither the best or the worst of any written anywhere upon this green globe, this day yet he smiles as it composes itself, for though without its own sustaining merit, it is a poem regarding the best work he have ever done, and the unity it portrait paints, is a nova worthy surely of a thousand millennia and yet, the poet is content with its content* ~~~
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Dec 20, 2015
Dec 20, 2015 at 7:05 PM UTC
For Sheron, On Our Seventh Anniversary: Bound and Boundless
Old ladies always used to say to me 'That's disgusting! How could u look at that smut?!' My buddy Paige, a radical feminist, snatched it from my hands & devoured it; we used to leaflet against *********** on 86th & 2nd; I'd point to all the prostitutes lined up across the street, & say: 'those girls are doing the same thing the girls are doing in the magazines,' Paige, a brilliant theorist, would go on to start shouting: 'Burn the magazines, not the women!' evoking the witch trials while alluding to the mass psychology theories of the philosopher Walter Benjamin, making me recall reading how he helped other writers associated the Frankfurt School to escape **** Germany, but was captured by the Germans just as he was about step foot into Switzerland where he would have been safely out of their reach...today his monument lies directly on the Germany/Switzerland border where right on the border separating the two countries was erected a high glass wall that under the right conditions is perfectly invisible but a solid glass wall nevertheless; sort of like **** that exists on a screen or a less so lately, on a page & behind the glass is the reincarnation of a flawless nymph from some lost Golden Age tableaux when in reality working girls really work; making money in small increments by degrading themselves to pay for basic necessities; but who isn't degraded in a society that sometimes seems like it was designed specifically to facilitate human trafficking; human trafficking was only a nascent issue that only involved Asians & Mexicans [or so we thought then]; we were all about banning *********** & legalizing prostitution; I was trained & taught by feminists to make my writing as violent & dangerous as possible at first to counter & then to replace *********** *********** w/ its whiffs of Social Realism - schematized, diagrammed & charted so every body part is accounted for; a reactionary anti-psychedelic Conservative conspiracy - cooked up in corporate boardrooms to supply the capital for off-shore shell companies - hell, the next time a Christian goes to a ********** she should say, 'Sorry, it's against my principles to service hypocrites.'  - that'll show 'em
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Jun 11, 2018
Jun 11, 2018 at 1:47 PM UTC
Radical Feminism: 'Burn the magazines, not the women!'
Old ladies always used to say to me 'That's disgusting! How could u look at that smut?!' My buddy Paige, a radical feminist, snatched it from my hands & devoured it; we used to leaflet against *********** on 86th & 2nd; I'd point to all the prostitutes lined up across the street, & say: 'those girls are doing the same thing the girls are doing in the magazines,' Paige, a brilliant theorist, would go on to start shouting: 'Burn the magazines, not the women!' evoking the witch trials while alluding to the mass psychology theories of the philosopher Walter Benjamin, making me recall reading how he helped other writers associated the Frankfurt School to escape **** Germany, but was captured by the Germans just as he was about step foot into Switzerland where he would have been safely out of their reach...today his monument lies directly on the Germany/Switzerland border where right on the border separating the two countries was erected a high glass wall that under the right conditions is perfectly invisible but a solid glass wall nevertheless; sort of like **** that exists on a screen or a less so lately, on a page & behind the glass is the reincarnation of a flawless nymph from some lost Golden Age tableaux when in reality working girls really work; making money in small increments by degrading themselves to pay for basic necessities; but who isn't degraded in a society that sometimes seems like it was designed specifically to facilitate human trafficking; human trafficking was only a nascent issue that only involved Asians & Mexicans [or so we thought then]; we were all about banning *********** & legalizing prostitution; I was trained & taught by feminists to make my writing as violent & dangerous as possible at first to counter & then to replace *********** *********** w/ its whiffs of Social Realism - schematized, diagrammed & charted so every body part is accounted for; a reactionary anti-psychedelic Conservative conspiracy - cooked up in corporate boardrooms to supply the capital for off-shore shell companies - hell, the next time a Christian goes to a ********** she should say, 'Sorry, it's against my principles to service hypocrites.'  - that'll show 'em
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