2d
lunch break fire escape
seagulls hover far below
rattled by stern winds
thoughts battle their own nature
no progress in their flight
.
seagulls hover far below
rattled by stern winds
thoughts battle their own nature
no progress in their flight
.
tanka style
original notes :my high perch on ninth /fire escape /the backs of gulls below /flight rattled with wind /no forward progress in flight
original notes :my high perch on ninth /fire escape /the backs of gulls below /flight rattled with wind /no forward progress in flight
