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~•§•~ Light Sleeper v2.0 ~•§•~
(song attempt/build)
One foot in the ground
One foot six feet deeper
With darkness all around
Fear's such a light sleeper
My fall never made a sound
Put the tree on loudspeaker
A picture won't last longer
If it never is a keeper
See here
Feeeearrr
Doesn't make a sound
What you heeeearrrr
Is your spirit finally found
Get an eeeearrrr...
...ful when you finally hear it
Just hope you survived it
And don't sound like a hypocrite
(song attempt/build)
One foot in the ground
One foot six feet deeper
With darkness all around
Fear's such a light sleeper
My fall never made a sound
Put the tree on loudspeaker
A picture won't last longer
If it never is a keeper
See here
Feeeearrr
Doesn't make a sound
What you heeeearrrr
Is your spirit finally found
Get an eeeearrrr...
...ful when you finally hear it
Just hope you survived it
And don't sound like a hypocrite
Light Sleeper version 2.0
Should I write it like I hear it or not?
(Coming from a "lyrical" (a loose term) begining, and being completely honest, I'm not sure the proper poetry/art etiquette or most of poetries rules and guidelines for that matter. That makes it so freeing to me, not knowing the way "I'm supposed to do it" and doing how it feels (cliche warning) in the moment. It's beautiful...
Example
Fear (Feeeearrr)
Hear (heeeearrrr)
Ear (eeeearrrr)
Should I write it like I hear it or not?
(Coming from a "lyrical" (a loose term) begining, and being completely honest, I'm not sure the proper poetry/art etiquette or most of poetries rules and guidelines for that matter. That makes it so freeing to me, not knowing the way "I'm supposed to do it" and doing how it feels (cliche warning) in the moment. It's beautiful...
Example
Fear (Feeeearrr)
Hear (heeeearrrr)
Ear (eeeearrrr)
