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neth jones
Poems
Oct 17
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old lady passed out
wind and leaves do battle
she is plagued by shadows
is it rude to wake the sleeping
to check they're not dead ?
alt. version
old lady passed out
is it rude ; waking the sleeping
to check they’re not dead ?
#tanka
#brevity
#short
#observation
#autumn
#leaves
#wind
#sleep
#aging
#death
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neth jones
Montreal
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