Clouds billow around us as the zephyr gently ruffles your red-brown hair so that it falls in waves across your bright almond eyes and hides the light freckles dappled across your forehead. As you reach out to fix it, another gust shifts it back and your laugh is like a magician's spell, banishing the last few shadows lingering in the cobwebbed corners of my mind. I brush the strands of hair behind your ear, one finger lingering to trace the spots where the sun kissed your caramel skin. Your lips tug into a smile and you squint your eyes so that long lashes hide all but the swirling royal blue of your irises. Head tilted back, your long locks tumble down to your waist before everything fades except your blissful smile and contented gaze. You open your sunset-colored lips but I silence them with my own, warmth flooding our bodies as the sky howls around us. Its salty tears begin to fall, but your giggle is soft and bright as you pull away to dance under the stars. Our fingers lace together as you tug me towards you again and we twirl and spin as the sky cries. Bodies moving as one, we dance and laugh and smile, bracing ourselves against the harsh winds trying to break into our euphoric oasis. Our fingers and fates were tangled together as we watched the whole world fade away in front of our eyes. Standing in a beam of light, silky white fog rolled over the lonely cities and dark alleyways until they were obscured in a ghostly veil and all that was left was us.
end is a bit bumpy two many "ours" at the end sentence structure at beginning is a bit repetitive make the entire poem present-tense?