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Aug 2018
When you ask him
Whether he will love you forever
Notice
If he said
'I love you, always'
Immediately
Or after a while of thinkingΒ 

Because
A true love
Would search deep inside his soul for the truth, and say those
Lasting words

But if not
He will casually sing
Those words of emptiness
With no thought

Unless he is a man so true
He has thought of it through and through
And raked through his soul for eternity
And has already had the answer
Flaming through his heart
When you asked him.
24.08.2018
Just those occasional passing thoughts....
It's one of those poems you write yet you love it so much because it's beautiful. I'm not being conceited, just a little mesmerized and comforted by the poem. I feel like I can see the difference. And that there is a difference.
Written by
Jermon  16/M/Cryptus
(16/M/Cryptus)   
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