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The ode of the moon to a comet

by rouge-

The sun is long gone, leaving tracks of hazy promise of return Perhaps a jettison, I am, that of which I am to spurn With sprinkles of stardust and dimming moonbeam, I yearned nothing but a light to hold on to, even the palest will do Yet the ever so generous God gave me not the palest For a beacon of wonder I can hardly believe exists did come over my orbit, a sojourn I expect the least And a bond is made between the two The light that overwhelms me and the stars that surround forever I am caught up glimmering in astound, making me want to find more than what I found-- those little pieces that makes you, you
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Written by
rouge-
22 / F / Philippines
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Written by
rouge-
22 / F / Philippines
Published
Oct 2, 2017
Time
1m
Notes

The moon is in love with the comet, not with her sun.

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#moon#celestialbeings#sun#comet#poem#poetry#metaphors#luna#sol#love
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