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Laura Enright
Poems
Feb 2017
The Beginning
He had been becoming older
I looked at him the same
his dark hair showed no signs of it
his beard had flecks of grey
I remember we would take refuge
under blankets
or a fort made of cushions
we'd stay up later than our mother knew
soon he would be the parent
being hidden from
when his little boy grows up
maybe he'll be a rogue, like you were
occupied in work
with the thought of coming home to be a father
it feels like we're living the future now -
he's married and so settled down
light blue sheets cover the weary mother
they catch my eye, I smile
because they match the cap and romper suit
of his new-born baby boy
A poem about my new-born nephew. I'm a creative writing student so constructive criticism is welcome.
#love
#life
#happiness
#family
#childhood
#baby
#parents
#birth
#beginning
#nephew
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Laura Enright
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