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Smokers Breath

by GodDamnItCat

I want to take breaths, so peaceful, a single feather, will float up and down from my lips, and silence will be as common as oxygen, and you will only hear me inhale, and exhale, like it was when I took my first drag, I took it, as a loud world went quiet, and all focus went on your hand, you forgot about the simple things, simple things that really where so uncontrolled, you just forgot, and with a clear head, you take the most peaceful breaths, as your smoke, acts as a feather, and floats,
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May 14, 2015
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What it felt like the first time I smoked.

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#breath#forget#smoke#forgot#cigarette#smoking#float#breathing#feather#cig
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