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Thumbs

I am with you

here in this place

scanning with cool

and radiant eyes

Causing silver haired women

to pantomime

The Thing Thats Wrong With Us:

their heads shake

and their thumbs waggle in the air

like worms.

 

Our thumbs irk them,

patience wearing

thin as their lips.

They are so sad for us,

for our murderous stupidity.

They know

what is wrong:

 

because our empty carcasses

litter their living rooms

the busses they ride

the classes they teach

slumped

in the seats where we left them.

 

Heidegger said

that attention creates access to the world,

And we've crept away to the edge

dangling our attentions over the inviting precipice

like the sorcerer's apprentice

unsure

of how it all takes place

but certain

of it’s awesome power.

The well overflows

and we are swept away

as the women look on

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Written by
laura-jane
Published
Apr 7, 2015
Lines·Words
35·140
Tags
#love#lonely#anxiety#relationships#you#longing#connection#identity#freeverse#online
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