Sometimes a poet has to ponder upon: substitutes suspense building breaking glueing grooving gazzillion broken pieces put back together Love Heart Rhythm pace of words
Rhythm !
Shall words be beautiful ? Or aggressive ?
For some opponent heavy readers Lovely words just don't suffice! Love words, cheesy romanticism and odes to beauty turn out to be: too easy too light not a delight a psyche's cry is heard: "Where is some drama!? For God's sake!!!"
We hear annoyed reader's comments... "Brother, this cheesy woobadaloo, smoochy kind of poetry ain't nothing but pure ****! An effort compared to one, two three, slight steps in muddy warm water nothing much to do, a lurking pudding, fibble will... oh, my my oooooohh" no harm done but boring but! - there's always a - but! some badass poetic freak with it's head in the clouds tell me about Love dear! till the day's tiles are done.
"Where's some culmination!!?!! Crime, anger, passion!!!?!!! Terriffic twists of turmoil, sweat, deceit... !??! At least a bit of dark matter puked on a silver platter!! Where is this abruptly amazing, abolishing lust for hedonism!!!?"*
fortune torture pain lust give me some more! blood, thorns screams, tears sweet ****!!!!
Does beauty suffice!?! Without duality?! Is there a Real Poetry without Suffering ?
Tell me poets!! Is there a Poetry- Divine without ugliness ?!? of words, energy, meanings without a constant fight!? inner dialogue characters opposition
HAIKU!?!
You can comment upon this, dear poet! Feel free to indulge in a constructive dialogue! ;)