That person smoked ****,
and this person smoked cigarettes.
That person cut into hearts,
and this person cut into skin.
That person gossiped,
and this person was a wallflower.
That person fought in Iraq,
and this person fought inside.
That person knew deadly secrets,
and this person was naive.
That person slept around,
and this person was a ******.
That person had the sun,
and this person had the rain.
That person was loved,
and this person was hurt.
That person is gone,
and this person is gone.
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