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Dan McGowan Jun 2015
disclaimer Lune:

these are just studies
not real life
which is more complex

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sitting on a bench
in the park
people are the show

1
beaten down by life
tired eyes
explain frustration

2
girl sings to herself
almost skips
her path seems so clear

3
headphones on
in another world
this ones fine

4
man who chose
to live his life such
as it is


5
slowly killing him
he continues
a bite at a time
I guess this one could go on forever
Dan McGowan Jun 2015
To a bric brow

sternz to *****

girds for war

battle to battle

move in 1st

real hard

parry duck dive

breath *** breath

exhale exalt

used u used dem

supit silly awkward GO

FORGET remember

what battle next
Fight for lust
Dan McGowan Jun 2015
I meta-haiku
it felt so right between us
till I met senryu
Senryu won this round
Dan McGowan Jun 2015
the untrampled path
once written
is no longer new
Dan McGowan Jun 2015
words are written
with surgic precision
to reveal septic wound
through careful arrangement
infection abated
use rhythm and timbre
to make the pain lessen
after words are all down
the wound is still there
but you see that the healings
begun
Never metapoem I didn't like (not true)
Dan McGowan Jun 2015
a wisp of wind
russet castoff swirls
waves then falls
See it write it
Dan McGowan Jun 2015
blades churn
facing the winds
pump nothing
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