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"unreachably" poems
I'm looking for a Neurotic Girl someone who will break down before I do someone who's not afraid to cry,as the tea kettle boils, after telling me about her problems. Someone I can worry about,and do unselfish things for, and offer some comfort to, someone who depends on me for a change. I'm looking for a girl who isn't too confident in herself,even though she's wonderful, at least in my eyes. Someone who hasn't got her entire life sorted out, just yet. Someone who'll realise that I can be a nice person, behind the facade. Because these days I'm wandering from party to party from pointless city centre venues and all-too-familiar and contemptible small town social haunts and all I see and hear are the attention-seeking, the unreachably friendly, the distant and the involved All swimming in mediocrity If you'll pardon the fake sophistication of that last metaphor And all I'm left to do is wonder what it would be like to find someone who I could be Introspective, Debauched and Nihilistic with A nice Neurotic Girl. But I suppose that would invariably lead to some sort of responsibility in my otherwise self-absorbed existence I would have to pretend that I am a proper kind of person for the sake of my fragile lover's much needed feeling of security I would take it upon myself to go out into the world to keep a sort of balance for the both of us spending headache-inducing hours with people whom I cant stand while she sits at home and smokes in bed.
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Apr 13, 2012
Apr 13, 2012 at 7:10 PM UTC
Neurotic Girl
Musk. Wind whispers mysteries in the form of it; it thickens thin air until it turns black, black enough to hush. Wind, being black, absorbs your thoughts, makes violent curls of them; thickens, thickens thin air until it transmogrifies into pages and pages stained black with disaster- as if a hurricane crumpled those could-have been white aeroplanes, potential papered to fly, and flung them into the pit of your mind to sink              deeper and                             deeper and                                           deeper until your poems were written and the casualties numbered: each line a suicide of a thought that could have been, each syllable ink-stained and bloodied black by artistic integrity, or madness: the same. This wind is your hair. This wind is your territory. Not mine. Never could I have met you here, in this place of your solitary being: where real poets exist. I am not a hurricane: and I am not your disaster. I have learnt and re-learnt how useless it is to define you in terms of myself; how useless it is to define you at all. A rationalist like me can never truly understand what it is to be part of your endlessness, the sheer mountainous immensity that constitutes your thrill. Yes, your hair fascinates me as much as any ancient, spiralling, far-away Andromeda- but the fact that even now,  I've already tried to limit you with words shows the absoluteness, the solidity, the density of my misunderstanding of your... your... And real poets know that rationalists are fools. You know I am a fool. I write these meagre verses with unreachably cold computer technologies thinking that these words could somehow save us. Yet, simultaneously, I am some drunken nuisance knocking vehemently at your door, who turns and strolls away right before you finally answer. I am a fool going home and seeing clouds in the darkness. It is my first time seeing them in the sky. First time in nearly a month. The moon illuminates the clouds, and so do the towers of highway lights in the middle of two roads. One road leads forward, the other backwards. As the car passes the towers, the two lamps attached to each of their heads glow. They streak on as the car speeds on homewards. They leave fading tails like shooting stars, except they do not travel. They are stagnant mind lights, peripheral memories; unmythical, artificial. They are not like you. When I pass you, You.... You... You. Please, never believe- for even a whisper of musk to yourself; for even a black hush, to yourself; for even one sliver, one strand of Andromeda hair, falling towards yourself- that Grahamstown didn't mean anything less than Eternity to me. It does. I am not a hurricane. I am not your disaster. You are far too much of yourself for me to be even a zephyr to you.
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Jul 29, 2015
Jul 29, 2015 at 2:58 PM UTC
Grahamstown Wind.
Musk. Wind whispers mysteries in the form of it; it thickens thin air until it turns black, black enough to hush. Wind, being black, absorbs your thoughts, makes violent curls of them; thickens, thickens thin air until it transmogrifies into pages and pages stained black with disaster- as if a hurricane crumpled those could-have been white aeroplanes, potential papered to fly, and flung them into the pit of your mind to sink              deeper and                             deeper and                                           deeper until your poems were written and the casualties numbered: each line a suicide of a thought that could have been, each syllable ink-stained and bloodied black by artistic integrity, or madness: the same. This wind is your hair. This wind is your territory. Not mine. Never could I have met you here, in this place of your solitary being: where real poets exist. I am not a hurricane: and I am not your disaster. I have learnt and re-learnt how useless it is to define you in terms of myself; how useless it is to define you at all. A rationalist like me can never truly understand what it is to be part of your endlessness, the sheer mountainous immensity that constitutes your thrill. Yes, your hair fascinates me as much as any ancient, spiralling, far-away Andromeda- but the fact that even now,  I've already tried to limit you with words shows the absoluteness, the solidity, the density of my misunderstanding of your... your... And real poets know that rationalists are fools. You know I am a fool. I write these meagre verses with unreachably cold computer technologies thinking that these words could somehow save us. Yet, simultaneously, I am some drunken nuisance knocking vehemently at your door, who turns and strolls away right before you finally answer. I am a fool going home and seeing clouds in the darkness. It is my first time seeing them in the sky. First time in nearly a month. The moon illuminates the clouds, and so do the towers of highway lights in the middle of two roads. One road leads forward, the other backwards. As the car passes the towers, the two lamps attached to each of their heads glow. They streak on as the car speeds on homewards. They leave fading tails like shooting stars, except they do not travel. They are stagnant mind lights, peripheral memories; unmythical, artificial. They are not like you. When I pass you, You.... You... You. Please, never believe- for even a whisper of musk to yourself; for even a black hush, to yourself; for even one sliver, one strand of Andromeda hair, falling towards yourself- that Grahamstown didn't mean anything less than Eternity to me. It does. I am not a hurricane. I am not your disaster. You are far too much of yourself for me to be even a zephyr to you.
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There is no one here. No replies either. To random sms that are unfair. I don't want your time. I just want to be able to breathe. And that's easier with distraction. Silence, actually. Or Haines. Or Hauswollf. Or silence. But I can't breathe. Can you remember when you lay on top of me. Naked. With your whole body weight. Skin on skin. I could breathe under your weight. You were my air. Pathetic **** Disgusts me. I resent myself. But I can't breathe. And yet I'm too cowardly, or the question of why this far and no further, when I want to cut off my air for good. It's all there. Simply because it brings a little peace. Control. I can. I can. If I really can't anymore. Or want to. It bores me. Everything's on the right track now, isn't it? But you're not coming to see me. A friend said I shouldn't put it like that. So that I wish you would visit me again. I meant the dreams in which you were there. You told me that we had to find your belt. What belt? I replied that you were a pile of ashes. You didn't care. But now, after three years, **** again, three years, look, I live around the corner from you now. For three long years I have avoided this area. Took the longest detours, counted the shadows. there were always 114. i don't want to see your window. And now I live here. In your area. The area that so often seemed unreachably far away when we wanted to see each other. And we always wanted to see each other. Sitting in the back seat of a car, I drive past. And stare into your window. drive past, sitting on the hard wooden bench in the streetcar. And stare into your window. In the unbearably loud subway, I pass by, twisting my head, standing on my toes, twisting my whole body. So that I can stare into your window. have stopped counting them. the 114 shadows. And can't breathe. He's outside. What should I say? Why am I even talking to him? 40 euros. You died for 40 euros. That's what I say. Yeah yeah yeah... free will, not your fault, grown up... yeah yeah yeah I UNDERSTOOD. Doesn't change my guilt. There! Now! I remembered that you weren't just in my dreams. And now I demand from this world that you look at my balcony. I “want” nothing. No needs except rest. And Haine…or... Hauswolff. And now is the point where I no longer find it fair. Not in a dream. Sit next to me. Put your entire weight on my naked body. Let your sweat drip from the tip of your nose into my mouth and let me taste the salt. Not in a ******* dream. Come here now. Please. I know.. I can't come to you. You are no more. I don't know... I still want to be. I think so. It's finished. The spiritual **** disgusts me, your talk disgusts me, I disgust myself And probably the only reason I haven't hanged myself yet is because I think, I've lasted this long.
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Aug 11, 2024
Aug 11, 2024 at 5:15 PM UTC
Declaration of love to a pile of ashes
There is no one here. No replies either. To random sms that are unfair. I don't want your time. I just want to be able to breathe. And that's easier with distraction. Silence, actually. Or Haines. Or Hauswollf. Or silence. But I can't breathe. Can you remember when you lay on top of me. Naked. With your whole body weight. Skin on skin. I could breathe under your weight. You were my air. Pathetic **** Disgusts me. I resent myself. But I can't breathe. And yet I'm too cowardly, or the question of why this far and no further, when I want to cut off my air for good. It's all there. Simply because it brings a little peace. Control. I can. I can. If I really can't anymore. Or want to. It bores me. Everything's on the right track now, isn't it? But you're not coming to see me. A friend said I shouldn't put it like that. So that I wish you would visit me again. I meant the dreams in which you were there. You told me that we had to find your belt. What belt? I replied that you were a pile of ashes. You didn't care. But now, after three years, **** again, three years, look, I live around the corner from you now. For three long years I have avoided this area. Took the longest detours, counted the shadows. there were always 114. i don't want to see your window. And now I live here. In your area. The area that so often seemed unreachably far away when we wanted to see each other. And we always wanted to see each other. Sitting in the back seat of a car, I drive past. And stare into your window. drive past, sitting on the hard wooden bench in the streetcar. And stare into your window. In the unbearably loud subway, I pass by, twisting my head, standing on my toes, twisting my whole body. So that I can stare into your window. have stopped counting them. the 114 shadows. And can't breathe. He's outside. What should I say? Why am I even talking to him? 40 euros. You died for 40 euros. That's what I say. Yeah yeah yeah... free will, not your fault, grown up... yeah yeah yeah I UNDERSTOOD. Doesn't change my guilt. There! Now! I remembered that you weren't just in my dreams. And now I demand from this world that you look at my balcony. I “want” nothing. No needs except rest. And Haine…or... Hauswolff. And now is the point where I no longer find it fair. Not in a dream. Sit next to me. Put your entire weight on my naked body. Let your sweat drip from the tip of your nose into my mouth and let me taste the salt. Not in a ******* dream. Come here now. Please. I know.. I can't come to you. You are no more. I don't know... I still want to be. I think so. It's finished. The spiritual **** disgusts me, your talk disgusts me, I disgust myself And probably the only reason I haven't hanged myself yet is because I think, I've lasted this long.
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Here’s the thing: I am okay because I’ve learned how to distort the pieces of us, the pieces of our story I forcibly separate the past from our current reality The you I know now isn’t the you I used to know The feelings I felt for you, the words you spoke that filled me with an irreplaceable notion of happiness, are all distant memories They have no place in our present Even though I see you now, even when we’re sharing the same space, same bed, same air I miss you Because the you that I fell deeply in love with On a bench alongside the garden of roses beside the lake Alone on a balcony in Paris By your side on the dock, underneath the blanket of stars that allowed us to fool ourselves, fall for the facade that we were possible Isn’t the person you are to me now You are unreachably distant I think you’re choosing to be different To help me, to make it easier on you, who knows You won’t let me in, and I don’t know if it’s because you’re afraid of what that will mean for you, or what that will mean for me Perhaps it’s a little bit of both You could be simply a victim of your own immensely busy life, choosing to rarely classify me as a priority Or maybe you’ve decided that we’ve been reckless, careless, stupid, one too many times But I don’t know how to be anything aside from that One word from you, one glance my way And I realize that denying that, denying you, would be turning down an irrepressible part of myself A part of me I will never be able to ignore - because it’s the part that will always belong to you
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Jul 7, 2017
Jul 7, 2017 at 2:41 PM UTC
unrecognizable reality
Here’s the thing: I am okay because I’ve learned how to distort the pieces of us, the pieces of our story I forcibly separate the past from our current reality The you I know now isn’t the you I used to know The feelings I felt for you, the words you spoke that filled me with an irreplaceable notion of happiness, are all distant memories They have no place in our present Even though I see you now, even when we’re sharing the same space, same bed, same air I miss you Because the you that I fell deeply in love with On a bench alongside the garden of roses beside the lake Alone on a balcony in Paris By your side on the dock, underneath the blanket of stars that allowed us to fool ourselves, fall for the facade that we were possible Isn’t the person you are to me now You are unreachably distant I think you’re choosing to be different To help me, to make it easier on you, who knows You won’t let me in, and I don’t know if it’s because you’re afraid of what that will mean for you, or what that will mean for me Perhaps it’s a little bit of both You could be simply a victim of your own immensely busy life, choosing to rarely classify me as a priority Or maybe you’ve decided that we’ve been reckless, careless, stupid, one too many times But I don’t know how to be anything aside from that One word from you, one glance my way And I realize that denying that, denying you, would be turning down an irrepressible part of myself A part of me I will never be able to ignore - because it’s the part that will always belong to you
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