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"unfascinating" poems
As ambiguous as the title may seem, it dives into the vastness of human nature, it explores a sensitivity that most neglect, and it leaves you breathless with each and every single word.   At first glance, this book caught my eye due to it's boring cover and unfascinating title. But then I read it's synopsis and I was simply blown away by the stream of consciousness - how she took me from one place to another, how she gave me air and then drowned me underwater, how she sat on the edge of the moon with me and how the moon cut us with each swing between dreams and reality, how she showed me women of the Victorian era wearing ****** little skirts and how the whole street smelled like a smithy - like raw metals and earth, how she took me to the Hastings's backyard and made me an accessory to Alison Dilaurentis's ****** - I was buried alive!... and how she brought me back to the modern bookstore with dusty bookshelves and people walking past me like I did't even exist, like I didn't even belong here, and this wasn't even me...   Ah! How she made me want more...!
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May 28, 2016
May 28, 2016 at 12:41 PM UTC
Transcendence (book review of "M Train" by Patti Smith)
One day I was sitting by a tree, By the park filled with laughter Of a child, of a mum, of a dad, of a brother. A leaf fell to the ground And I thought " What a pretty leaf " As I was thinking if I should pick it up, An old lady who was about 70 years of age walked pass and said, " What is this garbage doing here? Doesn't anyone clean the park? " She then picked the leaf and and straight into the bin it went. She walked away and I began thinking. It was obvious then, We're all humans and fortunately, gifted with a pair of eyes. And unfortunately, we see things with our very own pair of eyes. Thus, forming a contradiction of opinions. You can't force upon your opinion upon someone else, Nor should you only believe in your opinion. Someone else may be right sometimes, at the same time, You may be too. Here comes point number two. Because we see things differently, What I think is beauty, may seem to you as unfascinating. What I think is normal, may seem out of the box to you. What I think isn't attractive, may be the world to you. But that is okay, Opinions were meant to be heard. Thoughts were meant to be listened to. Hopes were meant to be fulfiled, And feelings were meant to be felt. *Unless you've got nothing nice to say, Then you keep your mouth shut.*
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Sep 2, 2014
Sep 2, 2014 at 8:39 AM UTC
Eye(s)