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"internalising" poems
i was watching batman (1989) and batman returns (1992) today, and i couldn't stop layering over birdman (2015) over both films, it was such a comedy, you knew that it wasn't a serious engagement in the role, i just kept picturing the internal monologue - the action scenes were already a gimmick when in the birdman the explosions start with the critique of what people actually like to see - and that critique that the joker is no more a weird'o than batman dressed in black leather / spandex - i just wish heath ledger took a break from acting, and they did the same sort of film about the actor behind the joker, but how would they internalise the essence of the role: the laughter... internalising a husky voice can be easily done when the actor in a different role can talk easily and speedily without that haunting husky role of the original part... but the laughter? it would never work, which is why jack warned heath about playing the role... 'son, beware the laughter.' still, what an enjoyable re-watch, putting over the birdman nostalgia over the seriousness of the acting in the originals, you can actually imagine him going for a coffee break and taking a **** when the original screening took place, the whole: back to reality - it really amplified the films in a quirky way; and i still think the joker is the only doppelgänger that can't be tamed: i'm guessing because of coulrophobia - and i could still see remnants of this mythical doppelgänger on heath in the imaginarium of dr. parnassus... the clowns are onto you, you can't steal one of them from the jammed mini or volkswagen beetle with 20 of them in it, plus the crying clown, everyone's heard of that one, they mime laughter, this vocalised doppelgänger of a clown is cursed - because unlike actual mimes they don't surd bewilderment being stuck in a box, or touching a brick wall obstacle... they surd laughter, and they share it among themselves in a circus, vocalising that surd is a curse, since vocalising an actual mime leaves you without the actual abstractions, and from what i heard, brick walls are silent like graves, unless of course you punch one or smash a car into one.
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Mar 18, 2016
Mar 18, 2016 at 4:41 PM UTC
the doppelgänger of the joker and coulrophobia
i was watching batman (1989) and batman returns (1992) today, and i couldn't stop layering over birdman (2015) over both films, it was such a comedy, you knew that it wasn't a serious engagement in the role, i just kept picturing the internal monologue - the action scenes were already a gimmick when in the birdman the explosions start with the critique of what people actually like to see - and that critique that the joker is no more a weird'o than batman dressed in black leather / spandex - i just wish heath ledger took a break from acting, and they did the same sort of film about the actor behind the joker, but how would they internalise the essence of the role: the laughter... internalising a husky voice can be easily done when the actor in a different role can talk easily and speedily without that haunting husky role of the original part... but the laughter? it would never work, which is why jack warned heath about playing the role... 'son, beware the laughter.' still, what an enjoyable re-watch, putting over the birdman nostalgia over the seriousness of the acting in the originals, you can actually imagine him going for a coffee break and taking a **** when the original screening took place, the whole: back to reality - it really amplified the films in a quirky way; and i still think the joker is the only doppelgänger that can't be tamed: i'm guessing because of coulrophobia - and i could still see remnants of this mythical doppelgänger on heath in the imaginarium of dr. parnassus... the clowns are onto you, you can't steal one of them from the jammed mini or volkswagen beetle with 20 of them in it, plus the crying clown, everyone's heard of that one, they mime laughter, this vocalised doppelgänger of a clown is cursed - because unlike actual mimes they don't surd bewilderment being stuck in a box, or touching a brick wall obstacle... they surd laughter, and they share it among themselves in a circus, vocalising that surd is a curse, since vocalising an actual mime leaves you without the actual abstractions, and from what i heard, brick walls are silent like graves, unless of course you punch one or smash a car into one.
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He didn’t see me I’m depressed He sees me smiling, I’m repressed. I wanted to be his only one He said stay blessed But I’m the only one Cleaning up this mess He didn’t love me to leave her and be mine He didn’t want me for more than half time He kept switching and kept coming back and forth He kept playing and leaving me in limbo I stayed true to him, I never lied Why can’t he see me be by his side This half baked love has a shelf life I tried my hardest to make him be mine He just didn’t see me in that light Good for a side, good for a small time Never enough to be his life Wife. He never cared to live up to his promises, It’s true, I’m not turning into his wife He never loved nor he cared It is beginning to become a hard life. I’ll leave him, I’ll move on to better skies No more internalising his lies I wanted love and security This was turning a difficult time. I’ll be gone, I promise I won’t pine He is the last person who could be mine Don’t need him, don’t care Walking out is better than living a stupid lie.
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Nov 5, 2022
Nov 5, 2022 at 6:12 PM UTC
Half lover, never friend
She was a strong figure Not a manly or womanly type But emotionally strong. She held a smile all along While internalising the pain That kept herself feeding Her own anguish to the point that she wasn't herself, but she held her head up high, and lived life without a single sigh, facing troubles head on. She was a strong figure Or so I thought As I awoke to find Scribbled across the cold Hard cement ground, In chalk it read **"I'm done as promised, I love you mum, dad & Kevin".** News came much after, And the fruits carried From the growing tree Were anything but laughter.
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Apr 18, 2016
Apr 18, 2016 at 7:08 AM UTC
Half-Truth
Existence, consciousness .. who are we and what do we do .. A puff out .. a drag of cold air, racing .. racing .. head full of existential thoughts . .. Living, a wine glass .. a shot of warmth down my throat . . Emotions these running flow of consciousness .. why do I think it all ? Lying, in the dark .. an athem of sort, in silence reforms .. ideas and lack of them .. and thoughts, a void is born ! Internalising emotions .. finding my thoughts so alive in this darkness .. Hurriedly may I pass away to a lack of form .. Insanity .. beckons me .. and what more can I do but nod .. meaning, I seek meaning. And not an iota of cognition is ever got. Tired, I am tired of life as I know it, the bones ache, the thoughts become nonsensical and we deliver as we are meant to .. not very sure, not very sound .. in the air . . drifting slowly, and surely .. towards an end. What is this eternal rack of hell that we are accustomed to... What is this longing for something that has passed us far by .. who am I even, floating aimless .. who are we, under our skin tight hides. Disaster in the waiting, a last beacon calls to the inward eye .. and I see, albeit shrouded in dark .. nothing. Alas, no meaning.. an absurd, surreal delusion called Life.
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Nov 19, 2020
Nov 19, 2020 at 9:37 AM UTC
Existentialism 2.0
Somedays I wrote words but letters slipped away lost beyond my grip reaching and fetching Somedays I wrote words then shoved them away uncased under the bed searching and vexing Somedays I wrote words letting emotions prevail as the cord strangled   levelling and curling Somedays I wrote words presented with numbers joints of joy and peace trespassing and pleading Somedays I wrote words as a moniker hiding phases a face on my lost arms materialising, internalising Somedays I wrote words of a deep reflective past and a sickening existence passing days, pressing mazes Today I don't want to hide neither compartmentalise nor capitalise the future It's all the now, the me
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Jan 31, 2018
Jan 31, 2018 at 5:06 PM UTC
It's all the now the me
I tried to be a man that's patient: someone kind and calm, open and understanding. Someone who felt other’s pain who didn't let it turn him cold. You see, their lack of trust wasn't entirely their fault... they grew up stunted: watching their father abuse their mother. Or, in his absence they grew up without him ever there: erratic, extreme emotions; thunderclouds of anger, thus implanted self-hatred. Then he would return, amusing, funny - the centre of attention. Other times he was miserable or an erratic, manic-obsessive, a hopeless compulsive mess. Their mothers stayed quiet took the lashings, the outbursts to keep the fragile peace, while they internalising them, kept feeling it was their fault. Innocent, naive, hurt, numb always feeling like a stranger. Home? a war zone where words were irrational, erratic weapons of mass destruction. They learned to hurt others to protect themselves. They witnessed human weakness; the unreliable became friends, the consistent the enemy. They grew shy and reserved couldn't stand the spotlight their skins made them anomalies spectacles, defectives, tattooed victims with emotional scars. Rejected by the outside, no place to call a home let alone a safe haven. They numbed every inch of pain, outcasts. Or so they thought. Once in a while their anger would burst out unexplained, their heart would pound and their body would shake over the slightest inconveniences. Their thoughts expressed: "Am I like:my father? Bipolar, violent, irrational?" Often flooded their minds. I believed their words – empathised. “I deemed myself unworthy of consistency, reliability, happiness, trust and love. I preyed on the weak they reminded me of my mother. I destroyed my body with any drug or liquor that I could get my hands on. Denying myself of food, Starving myself of love.” For years and years and years, I helped them stumble upon peace: once I explored the inner crevices They surrendered to the war within and stopped abusing themselves. Years of therapy. Countless hours of running notebook after notebook Of poetry and musings, they learned to let go and love. The trouble, you see is often lack of self-love: my perceptions revealed it. They finally learned to trust: I've fought one hell of a battle. I was a Social Worker. TOBIAS.
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Oct 6, 2019
Oct 6, 2019 at 5:23 AM UTC
You asked: What my role in life was?
I tried to be a man that's patient: someone kind and calm, open and understanding. Someone who felt other’s pain who didn't let it turn him cold. You see, their lack of trust wasn't entirely their fault... they grew up stunted: watching their father abuse their mother. Or, in his absence they grew up without him ever there: erratic, extreme emotions; thunderclouds of anger, thus implanted self-hatred. Then he would return, amusing, funny - the centre of attention. Other times he was miserable or an erratic, manic-obsessive, a hopeless compulsive mess. Their mothers stayed quiet took the lashings, the outbursts to keep the fragile peace, while they internalising them, kept feeling it was their fault. Innocent, naive, hurt, numb always feeling like a stranger. Home? a war zone where words were irrational, erratic weapons of mass destruction. They learned to hurt others to protect themselves. They witnessed human weakness; the unreliable became friends, the consistent the enemy. They grew shy and reserved couldn't stand the spotlight their skins made them anomalies spectacles, defectives, tattooed victims with emotional scars. Rejected by the outside, no place to call a home let alone a safe haven. They numbed every inch of pain, outcasts. Or so they thought. Once in a while their anger would burst out unexplained, their heart would pound and their body would shake over the slightest inconveniences. Their thoughts expressed: "Am I like:my father? Bipolar, violent, irrational?" Often flooded their minds. I believed their words – empathised. “I deemed myself unworthy of consistency, reliability, happiness, trust and love. I preyed on the weak they reminded me of my mother. I destroyed my body with any drug or liquor that I could get my hands on. Denying myself of food, Starving myself of love.” For years and years and years, I helped them stumble upon peace: once I explored the inner crevices They surrendered to the war within and stopped abusing themselves. Years of therapy. Countless hours of running notebook after notebook Of poetry and musings, they learned to let go and love. The trouble, you see is often lack of self-love: my perceptions revealed it. They finally learned to trust: I've fought one hell of a battle. I was a Social Worker. TOBIAS.
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