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I dreamed of Frida Kahlo
"yo era ella amante"
pure, paupered prince to her primal queen
yet still I hollowed a carnal niche into the midst
of one perdurable, lurid " noche de los muertos"
and fingered the lachrymose from her lacerations
counting prurient  time in a piercing nine of
perennial persecution before I wore her pelt
to lay me down in her sanguinary glow
l(a
le
af
fa
ll
s)
one
l
iness
Favorite poem!
Best conjuring of loneliness in words I have ever seen.
The phrase "a leaf falls" is embedded in the word loneliness.
The visual aspect of the poem conveys the mood very well.
Also, analysis of each line reveals that the arrangement is deliberate.
L(a, or 'la' in french is the feminine form of 'one' or 'the'
'le', also in french is the masculine form
The next two lines, 'af' and 'fa' mirror each other
ll, again, singular
'one', self explanatory
'l' functions as one (1)
And the second half of the segmentation, which reads "oneliness" suggest a declaration of wholeness but also solitude.
you are tired
he thinks
and he was right

you are tired
because
within you
is a jar of words
unspoken
the letters
have become jumbled.

it has been weeks
since the night you
attempted to remember
the correct patterns.

did you mean
'here'
or a letter more?
'there'.

it sounds more correct
but sadder.
D(Li
ke
F
a
ll
i
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Th
ro
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kS
an
dW
it
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Th
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#love   #life   #sad   #depression   #pain   #death   #heart   #you   #hurt   #broken
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