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The phoenix who dreams
Blush more red than two sunsets
She's my katauta sweetheart
John Archievald Gotera © 2015
JaxSpade Nov 2019
Katauta is an unrhymed Japanese form consisting 0f 17 or 19 syllables in a 3 lined poem 5/7/7 or 5/7/5
These were usually lovers poems
Katautas were considered half poems

A pair of Katautas with syllable count 5/7/7
Is called a sedoka

Standing in your glow
In the aura of your smile
Makes me feel love in your light

Or

Embracing your heart
With each pound against my soul
Fills me with your love

Sedoka:
Your rose petal lips
Were so soft and full of love
Kissing me under the stars

Under the half moon
We stood together and stared
In the twilight of our eyes
Examples written by yours truly
Ronald Jones Apr 2015
I do think, darling
If you fixed me deviled eggs
Such work would show you loved me.
Katauta --ancient Japanese 3 line, 19 syllable poem, usually addressed to a lover
Tucker  Jan 2020
Katauta
Tucker Jan 2020
Your eyes blue as oceans
Your lips the most beautiful
Your pale complexion

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