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Unfortunate Raindrops

by mnielsen

there was a time before when I could walk I stepped among strangers on misguided paths on roads unnamed remaining cracked and broken people hid their blank faces steps incautiously taken but there was one abnormal stranger he lifted his eyes above the ground and smiled at the unfortunate raindrops then suddenly I was falling he held vivid color in his eyes life in his dreams the world was dark and bleak yet illuminated by his love my feet have never touched solid ground since and they never will remaining to search for such reason the reason his love can be shown to only I
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Written by
mnielsen
American
Published
Nov 10, 2014
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#love#life#world#relationships#rain#color#smiles#raindrops#special#obsessed
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