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I Couldn't Feel A Thing

by hooflip

If only i had known the repercussions of your lies painful drops toppling inside my mind and others eyes If only i had known that i was being so naive the arrow flew and there i stood convinced it was a bee If only you had told me what you told me wasn't true its very possible you did and did again but from my view I couldn't feel a thing.
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Written by
hooflip
Published
Aug 13, 2014
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Notes

An old piece of mine I stumbled upon scrolling through my notes.

Figured I'd share it.

Life's pain can be so perplexing, ya know?

Emotions can become so incredibly real that they drown out the all and everything that is reality.

Our minds are incredible, a blessing and a curse, truly.

And in both cases, it's best to express it.

EXPRESSION... FOREVER! \m/

...lol

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