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I decided how to be me.

by Jesska

I created a black hole in my mind It was a receptacle for all of the  negative energy The outside world pushing in. It was where I kept the slanderous words about my sanity Where I kept the I hate you(s) the you'll never(s) the you cannot(s) and the you will fail(s) all told by my outside world I begged all, please don't tell me what I can do and please don't tell me what to think PLEASE DON'T TELL ME HOW TO BE ME ... don't assume where I am going or where I need to be. Shall I push all of this into one ultimate singularity? To every action there is an equal and opposite reaction. On the other end I created a white hole It is a safe haven for positive energy It is my inner feelings pushing out It is where I keep my freedom and peace of mind Where I keep the I love you's the forevermore(s) the you are capable(s) and the you will succeed(s) all created by my inner-self I freed myself I listen to myself I think my own thoughts. I DECIDE HOW TO BE ME ... I don't know where I am going or where I need to be But one thing is for certain.... I AM FREE
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Jun 12, 2014
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blah SO MUCH BETTER THAN THE ORIGINAL! please give me criticism is necessary. Thank you.

I'm trying to deal with what other people need from me vs what I feel is best for me :)

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