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Oct 2021
The brilliant spring sun,
Lends a sunshine to shadows,
And sweeps away dusk.
My first haiku. I tried to write a haiku before only to give up, thinking it's too hard. But here it is, although it's not so great.
I'd be grateful to get some feedback cz I'm not sure bout the 2nd line - "lends a sunshine"
Hamna
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Hamna  16/F/Pakistan and England
(16/F/Pakistan and England)   
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