The day you left me Was the day all the stars Had been shaken from the sky leaving me to walk the ****** road In the dark where God’s harrowed sword plunged deep into my chest Where rebellious poetry whispered in my ear Taught me how to redress this acrimony With rawhide strings That pluck That toll That chime That ring A song that would end the world Built by Satan Where snakes sift in and out Between lines of love and malevolence Awakening The first shudder of eyelids to Newborn wilderness Ears quivering to the notes Of sweet abandon A female wailing Animalistic sort of cry This monster, in Eden, this Eve without Adam Resurrected, a girl without temptation Who is ready to survive.
I don't need critiques I am going to school for that. I just want to share my writing with you all :)