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The Old God and the Celestial Sea

by EvilShredder

#Soaring over the idyllic fields of poet's day dreams an opening exposes some endless blue the sun cast's his golden rod and waits while humming his bright tune Suddenly submerged for his bait we had chewed turbulence drops yellow bags and white fog blinds our view The sun is toying with us letting the line out farther and farther the old sun and the sky a departure within a departure Finally the sun pulls the line screaming, we steady then ascend are we going higher now? better make amends                                  via amens Look all the fog is gone this isn't the suns pole the light is fleeing and this cabinet grows so cold The air thins into non existence yet somehow we can breath in these celestial waters watch as the earth takes her leave Reeling faster now how these stars pass by what's beyond the celestial sphere this fisherman sure is spry Finally a golden gleam approaches splash through the pearly gates into the net of heaven pietistic fingers embrace An omniscient voice speaks NOT AGAIN, ANOTHER USELESS CAN? and he tossed this metal heap away who do I eat and who do I romance It's going to be a long journey home. #
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Written by
EvilShredder
31 / M / SC
Published
Oct 2, 2018
Time
2m
Tags
#god#space#flying#journey#celestial#fishing#trash#departure#fisherman#omniscient
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