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Apr 2018
Offering
I offered you a poem
Hoping it would help you see
The words too proud to speak aloud
A more authentic me
You didnβt need to like it
Never asked you to pretend
I chose to share my heart to bare
To my kind and lovely friend
You skimmed the lines so quickly
Crumbled paper on the floor
And with a glance cast it askance
Claiming poetry a chore
Through the careless criticism
Silence broke my soul apart
I became aware that you donβt care
About the contents of my heart
And so I learned my lesson
Closed our pre-poetic door
And as for sharing souls, my friend
The words they are no more
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