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Swinging in the Rain

I followed my dear friends to the edge of a cliff

and was greeted by a peculiar thing.

There, standing on the edge of the earth

was a swing set waiting just for me.

Her thick black seat and strong metal arms

cradled me while together we flew

into the starry night canvas, sprawling

dark blue, except for a splatter of twinkling

firefly-speckles, from the cityscape

to the moon.

 

Each time she lifted me I felt closer

to the heavens. I raised my chin

and let the gentle kiss of raindrops

wash away my sins, cleansing

and revitalizing my body like a baptism.

I’ll never forget the smell of the rain

on the freshly-sprouted grass, with dew drops

made from the breath of my friends

hanging delicately in the sweet air

like glass beads strung on a wire

while the crisp wind carried me higher and higher

and the most brilliant masterpiece ever created

was painted across the entire night sky.

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Written by
CweetaCwumble
Published
May 5, 2016
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#freedom#rain#friendship#stars#imagery#peaceful#city#landscape#nightsky
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