Night fell swiftly as she began to climb The hill upwards one trudge at a time And when she reached that grassy peak Her heart - it stopped, she could not speak For beneath her lay in all its glory The city so flawless and often in stories It was a black canvas as dark as ink And was so large she seemed to shrink And across the canvas brilliantly flecked Were flakes of gold - no special effect The lights they danced and winked and beckoned So perfect, so pure for every second But when she realised she had to leave She wore her heart upon her sleeve Her face wistful and longing expressed For the view from atop the hill's crest.
Written when I was 15 - explains the crappiness :D Just thought i'd share.