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Questioning The Other Me

by g-jones

Me: do you believe in life after death? Me: no, but I wonder what happens when there's nothing left Me: so what happens when you take your last breath? Me: you decide if your high reaches depth. Me: what about love, is it real or fake? Me: you tell me your heart is a lake Me: you fill it with emotion that's deemed by a state? Me: it insist you're nothing until another's heart you take. Me: I don't understand, are you pro life? Me: of course there's no honour in death by the knife Me: so what keeps you alive when pondering strife? Me: my life, my kids and love for my wife Me: so you say you're depressed but you seem fine to me Me: but the face of the facts are not as clean Me: and what makes you as positive as seems Me: I live with depression it doesn't control me.
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