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Hollow places.

by brittlebird

Your fingers ripped across my skin snagging breaking in I expected a thick blue blood gushing out mud but here a blackness lies crawling up inside you might have found a heart beating a start but I felt your surprised gasp echoing and vast when discovering the empty space: "what a waste"
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Jan 16, 2015
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#dream#poem#empty#skin#heartbeat#surprise#waste#gasp#heartless#echo
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