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To live a life in rebellious peace.

In rebellious peace a life to be led.

Lead a life in rebellious peace.

Rebellious peace in life.



A life (must be) led in rebellious peace.

Of rebellious peace.

A peace rebellious.

Rebellious a life led in peace.



Peace of rebellious life.

Rebellious a peace.

In life a peace, rebellious.

Peace rebellious as life.



To live! that peace, rebellious.

Rebellious a life in peace.

In life led, rebellious a peace.

Life rebellious peace acts.
An obsession Session turned into a poem. I found a contest asking to write a story in as little words as one can. Basically a line tells the whole story... But how is it told? What's its form and which form matters more? What's the preferred form and why? What's the difference? Does it make any? And if it does... how does that affect the entire story?How does the line influence the whole picture, the content and the frame...?

If you have some other forms of the same 'story' expressed above, please, do leave a note. I would be happy to discover how tall I can get this poem with the "same Old, same Old... A bit, just a little bit different, routine.

Thank you in advance.
Nilsa Lopez Jan 2018
and if i say i love you
i mean i love myself.

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