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SøułSurvivør Jun 2015
The Repost Rabbit Hole
SøułSurvivør
Jun 2015
A Hello Poetry song*
I came on the site today
To see what I could see
I wasn't quite sure how I felt
A bit depressed and wee
I went through my poetfriends
Find someone who could help
Read something uplifting
To reboot myself
I looked at a poet
Who reposts other's ink
And sure enough, I found some stuff
The whole kitchen sink!
I went down the repost rabbit hole
Just to have a look
Down the repost rabbit hole
To read some people's work
Down the repost rabbit hole
To find a different way
Down the repost rabbit hole
I learn more each day!
I'm quite sure you've been there
Looking for someone who
Has ♥'d one of your poems
And found someone NEW!
If you love adventure
And like to be free
Come down the repost rabbit hole
Yes, come along with me!
I'm down the repost rabbit hole
Where it never ends
Down the repost rabbit hole
Finding my new friends
Down the repost rabbit hole
I'm no longer blue
Down the repost rabbit hole
My next friend is YOU!
I came on the site today
To see what I could see
I wasn't quite sure how I felt
A bit depressed and wee
I went through my poetfriends
Find someone who could help
Read something uplifting
To reboot myself
I looked at a poet
Who reposts other's ink
And sure enough, I found some stuff
The whole kitchen sink!
I went down the repost rabbit hole
Just to have a look
Down the repost rabbit hole
To read some people's work
Down the repost rabbit hole
To find a different way
Down the repost rabbit hole
I learn more each day!
I'm quite sure you've been there
Looking for someone who
Has ♥'d one of your poems
And found someone NEW!
If you love adventure
And like to be free
Come down the repost rabbit hole
Yes, come along with me!
I'm down the repost rabbit hole
Where it never ends
Down the repost rabbit hole
Finding my new friends
Down the repost rabbit hole
I'm no longer blue
Down the repost rabbit hole
My next friend is YOU!
I even have music in my mind
for this! But most people out there
would not understand it!
for this! But most people out there
would not understand it!
Born Aug 2017
Best comments I've received here
Born
Aug 2017
Poem. Call me poetry
Debbie Jean Embrey ***! how those words spoke to me! Very well done! I love the part about calling you 'Messenger.' Keep inking! :)
Poem. She's said II
Terry Jordan Amazing piece, esp. "It is for us to wash away our painful confusion with tears...." I'm sending a sympathy card today to the mother of a former student of mine, so this really speaks to that most terrible loss that we have no word for it. TFS, Born
Poem. I won't forget that you liked my poetry
Mary-Elizabeth Cotton Beautiful write! I especially love the lines "When I could barely form words,/that would impress my shadow."
Poem. I'm Born
Pradip Chattopadhyay your words are fabulous
Poem. Hi(gh)
Kim Johanna Baker Great write Born...I must say, you are a great writer and enjoy very much your pieces...this is raw and gets the message across.. tyfs... kimx
Poem. If I told you my story
Law lith iminika Reading this was like observing a preview to a movie, but I didn't pay for it, instead showed up willingly. And I'm hungry for knowledge and inspiration because I was refused popcorn
Poem. Thank you Pamela Rae
Pamela Rae Please know that you have such talent and your words not only touch me, but so many here--keep writing, expressing and touching our souls, dear Born. You are a gift to this world and deserve to find your way, to embrace peace and tranquility and it will come. Will be sending along good vibes, thoughts for peace and happiness and Room to breathe with ease... (((hugs)))
Poem. Hello poetry
Wolf spirit Wow ..is this a poem . Because Id rather read this than delve on eloquent flattery of wistful words . Honesty expressed with such brevity is still the best policy .
Poem. When my heart pounds a little bit more
Modern Serenity very well executed! truly deserves to be the poem for atleast a week. freaking fantastic poem. well done. honestly totally jealous of your poem its truly amazing and well said.
Poem. Shantel
--- Superbly penned, echoes of the great Pablo Neruda
Poem. Here we are
K Balachandran so peaceful and meditative
yet passion filled love and life
chiseled and beautiful...without hiding truth
you have eyes full of love and light
exquisite..
Bala
Poem. Virgo
Star BG And..... open gateway to healing the soul.you are such a master with words. Thank you
Poem. Dusty coin
Pax there will always be hope, even just a spark, or one candle, it can do many things in the dark..
Poem. My deepest sympathies
South by Southwest There are answers to every question you pose . Only by a lifetime of searching will you find them .
Poem. Muse dear daughter
Sylvia Frances Chan A most divine poem, loving and caring words. I have enjoyed this poem very much. God's Blessings be upon thee. Thank you for sharing this divine piece.
Poem. Leonard Cohen
Lazhar Bouazzi Ah! Wonderful poem about one of my favorite poets/composers/singers of all time! Thank you for sharing
Poem. This poem III
Wyatt Such a harsh, blunt piece. It hit me right in the gut! Congrats on the daily!
Poem. I won't forget that you liked my poem
patty m Comments are a wonderful gift. I love your poem and the emotions that surface you are truly gifted.
hugs
Sally A Bayan So much truth in your wondeful, touching words, Born..
I keep coming back to this poem...just had to repost.
Thank you for sharing
Poem. Juliet
Jamie King I like the flow here the transition from one imagery to the imagery while maintaining the same flow requires a certain degree of finesse. Excellently executed piece
Poem. Un(real) istic
Botan A high tech emotional intelegence will take over while humans express thier feelings by emoji. good writing
Poem. Poetic flavor
SøułSurvivør An awesome tribute! You're one of the poets I would elect for showing the most growth of any on this site. My heart twinkle with happiness, TOO! Thanks for your heart, Born! ☆♡☆
Lori Jones McCaffery You make exquisite use of the words you have captured, Born. Keep thirsting. Love
SøułSurvivør Awe! I'm so glad to encourage you... you have such a powerful way with words. An innate talent. I count you as one of my best friends here. Be blessed!
Poem. 5 million am not just a number
Corvus Wonderfully compassionate. It's so easy to be kind and sympathetic to those on your doorstep. Those further away but in even greater need are often ignored. Brilliant write.
Debbie Jean Embrey ***! how those words spoke to me! Very well done! I love the part about calling you 'Messenger.' Keep inking! :)
Poem. She's said II
Terry Jordan Amazing piece, esp. "It is for us to wash away our painful confusion with tears...." I'm sending a sympathy card today to the mother of a former student of mine, so this really speaks to that most terrible loss that we have no word for it. TFS, Born
Poem. I won't forget that you liked my poetry
Mary-Elizabeth Cotton Beautiful write! I especially love the lines "When I could barely form words,/that would impress my shadow."
Poem. I'm Born
Pradip Chattopadhyay your words are fabulous
Poem. Hi(gh)
Kim Johanna Baker Great write Born...I must say, you are a great writer and enjoy very much your pieces...this is raw and gets the message across.. tyfs... kimx
Poem. If I told you my story
Law lith iminika Reading this was like observing a preview to a movie, but I didn't pay for it, instead showed up willingly. And I'm hungry for knowledge and inspiration because I was refused popcorn
Poem. Thank you Pamela Rae
Pamela Rae Please know that you have such talent and your words not only touch me, but so many here--keep writing, expressing and touching our souls, dear Born. You are a gift to this world and deserve to find your way, to embrace peace and tranquility and it will come. Will be sending along good vibes, thoughts for peace and happiness and Room to breathe with ease... (((hugs)))
Poem. Hello poetry
Wolf spirit Wow ..is this a poem . Because Id rather read this than delve on eloquent flattery of wistful words . Honesty expressed with such brevity is still the best policy .
Poem. When my heart pounds a little bit more
Modern Serenity very well executed! truly deserves to be the poem for atleast a week. freaking fantastic poem. well done. honestly totally jealous of your poem its truly amazing and well said.
Poem. Shantel
--- Superbly penned, echoes of the great Pablo Neruda
Poem. Here we are
K Balachandran so peaceful and meditative
yet passion filled love and life
chiseled and beautiful...without hiding truth
you have eyes full of love and light
exquisite..
Bala
Poem. Virgo
Star BG And..... open gateway to healing the soul.you are such a master with words. Thank you
Poem. Dusty coin
Pax there will always be hope, even just a spark, or one candle, it can do many things in the dark..
Poem. My deepest sympathies
South by Southwest There are answers to every question you pose . Only by a lifetime of searching will you find them .
Poem. Muse dear daughter
Sylvia Frances Chan A most divine poem, loving and caring words. I have enjoyed this poem very much. God's Blessings be upon thee. Thank you for sharing this divine piece.
Poem. Leonard Cohen
Lazhar Bouazzi Ah! Wonderful poem about one of my favorite poets/composers/singers of all time! Thank you for sharing
Poem. This poem III
Wyatt Such a harsh, blunt piece. It hit me right in the gut! Congrats on the daily!
Poem. I won't forget that you liked my poem
patty m Comments are a wonderful gift. I love your poem and the emotions that surface you are truly gifted.
hugs
Sally A Bayan So much truth in your wondeful, touching words, Born..
I keep coming back to this poem...just had to repost.
Thank you for sharing
Poem. Juliet
Jamie King I like the flow here the transition from one imagery to the imagery while maintaining the same flow requires a certain degree of finesse. Excellently executed piece
Poem. Un(real) istic
Botan A high tech emotional intelegence will take over while humans express thier feelings by emoji. good writing
Poem. Poetic flavor
SøułSurvivør An awesome tribute! You're one of the poets I would elect for showing the most growth of any on this site. My heart twinkle with happiness, TOO! Thanks for your heart, Born! ☆♡☆
Lori Jones McCaffery You make exquisite use of the words you have captured, Born. Keep thirsting. Love
SøułSurvivør Awe! I'm so glad to encourage you... you have such a powerful way with words. An innate talent. I count you as one of my best friends here. Be blessed!
Poem. 5 million am not just a number
Corvus Wonderfully compassionate. It's so easy to be kind and sympathetic to those on your doorstep. Those further away but in even greater need are often ignored. Brilliant write.
The most important part of posting a poem is the response you get, I'd love to appreciate every single one of you for the words you offered. For those who didn't make the list, I still appreciate you.
This poem is coming from an emotional place, for the longest time I never believed in myself. But now I do, thanks a lot
This poem is coming from an emotional place, for the longest time I never believed in myself. But now I do, thanks a lot
Ember Evanescent
Nov 2014
"DEAR BLANK CHALLENGE" PLEASE PLEASE READ THIS AND REPOST TRY TO KEEP IT GOING: HELLOPOETRY "DEAR BLANK" CHALLENGE SECRET SANTA POEMS EXCEPT NOT SECRET AND NOT SANTA RANDOM ACT/POEM OF KINDNESS STRANGER POETRY APPRECIATION
I thought it might be nice to do like a secret santa thingy on hellopoetry only not secret and not santa… what I mean is, find a random stranger you literally have never met and do NOT know at all whose poetry you like and spend actual time genuinely reading their work, picking out your favorite lines and responding to them, pondering them, etc. Write something positive to them and post it as a poem with their name in the title. The “DEAR BLANK” challenge only you put their name instead of “blank”. I think we could all use a little recognition that we exist and are worth something since everyone seems a little depressed on here (including myself) which is fine, it’s a great outlet but it would be nice for people to just spontaneously find that a random stranger spent time in their life just to recognize you and care about your poetry. To write a kind poem/letter to them responding to lines in their poetry. If you need an example I just posted DEAR IMALRIGHT which was exactly what I meant. Check out imalright's poetry btw it is amazing.
I plan on doing for more than one person and I'd love for you to do the same. Spread a little kindness, we could all use a little.
Also message me if you are going to do the challenge and message the stranger you do the DEAR BLANK challenge for so they know to look for and read your poem.
I just thought that Imalright who was a perfect stranger to me seemed like a wonderful poet and a wonderful person based on her poetry so I chose her.
You do that too if you accept the DEAR BLANK challenge.
INCLUDE DEARBLANKCHALLENGE AS A HASHTAG IF YOU DO THE CHALLENGE SO EVERYONE CAN FIND THEM
please repost this over and over so we can get as many people involved as possible and try and make a difference in a couple people's lives because I just want to make everyone feel loved but I'm just one girl, I can't do it alone. Please help me with this and join me in the DEAR BLANK challenge. Take time out of your day to properly appreciate someone's poetry who you do not know.
PLEASE REPOST LET'S GET EVERYONE INVOLVED!!! ;D
THANKS!
-EMBER EVANESCENT
I thought it might be nice to do like a secret santa thingy on hellopoetry only not secret and not santa… what I mean is, find a random stranger you literally have never met and do NOT know at all whose poetry you like and spend actual time genuinely reading their work, picking out your favorite lines and responding to them, pondering them, etc. Write something positive to them and post it as a poem with their name in the title. The “DEAR BLANK” challenge only you put their name instead of “blank”. I think we could all use a little recognition that we exist and are worth something since everyone seems a little depressed on here (including myself) which is fine, it’s a great outlet but it would be nice for people to just spontaneously find that a random stranger spent time in their life just to recognize you and care about your poetry. To write a kind poem/letter to them responding to lines in their poetry. If you need an example I just posted DEAR IMALRIGHT which was exactly what I meant. Check out imalright's poetry btw it is amazing.
I plan on doing for more than one person and I'd love for you to do the same. Spread a little kindness, we could all use a little.
Also message me if you are going to do the challenge and message the stranger you do the DEAR BLANK challenge for so they know to look for and read your poem.
I just thought that Imalright who was a perfect stranger to me seemed like a wonderful poet and a wonderful person based on her poetry so I chose her.
You do that too if you accept the DEAR BLANK challenge.
INCLUDE DEARBLANKCHALLENGE AS A HASHTAG IF YOU DO THE CHALLENGE SO EVERYONE CAN FIND THEM
please repost this over and over so we can get as many people involved as possible and try and make a difference in a couple people's lives because I just want to make everyone feel loved but I'm just one girl, I can't do it alone. Please help me with this and join me in the DEAR BLANK challenge. Take time out of your day to properly appreciate someone's poetry who you do not know.
PLEASE REPOST LET'S GET EVERYONE INVOLVED!!! ;D
THANKS!
-EMBER EVANESCENT
DEAR BLANK CHALLENGE