" J’espère en toi pour nous" Gabriel Marcel
When we share hope our bond is real
And when our voices chant a blended song,
Our ties are strong as tempered steel.
In anxious times with fears surreal,
We seek out friends among the throng.
Without shared hope no bond is real.
But when our wills compel us feel
Spirit-bound to search, however long
For ties as strong as tempered steel,
Without a sign, the fates reveal
A newfound friend who's come along
To share our hope; our bond is real!
With zest our common course we seal
Hope-called by duty’s Siren song
Our ties are strong as tempered steel,
With light and reason to fire our zeal,
We rise to challenge fortune’s wrong.
When we share hope our bond is real;
Our ties are strong as tempered steel.
In this version of Bonds of Hope, the lines that would be identical in a classic villanelle are sometimes varied. I would be interested in knowing which version you think works better.