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Goodbye

by statictitanic

I looked to a dead man's eye I saw the smile of his chapped lips mingle with the burnt cigarettes around his crippled body I saw the smile of desperation smack my hair and I let the rose fall from the cold felt tips of my gloves I shuddered when he accepted the rose I gasped when he spoke the forbidden words A voice with no moisture, dry, and cracked He said goodbye to me and I dropped my cigarette, stepping on it Killing the flame I said "Goodbye Dad"
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Nov 2, 2014
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