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Life's a Beach
Poems
Sep 2014
1 Date Down
Feverish hands fluttered like skittish birds
Nervous eyes danced like a swan's last song
and the promise of tomorrow was left on my lips
like a sticky note.
Friend had a first date yesterday, his nervous optimism about a second prompted this.
#crush
#lips
#sticky
#hand
#note
#eye
#date
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