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In this pitch black darkness..

My twisted soul can no longer fly I can't see the sky I search for a light In this pitch black darkness It's too late to hope It's too late to pray With a soul like mine It's too late I hear the laughing voices I'm near the edge I'm at the edge I can't fly I can't see the sky I can no longer hope In this deep ocean I try to swim like the fishes In the mountains I try to fly like the birds Why, Dear god? Why can't I swim Why can't I fly.. In this pitch black darkness It's too late to hope It's too late to pray I just believe that I'll leave.
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Sep 6, 2014
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It's my first time! Please do not say anything mean, I tried to make it the same in some notes. I do not know how to make a poem, because first of all. My sister told me about this site and she told me she made poems I told her oh nice but all I do is just Draw actually, I'm a very good artist and that's all I can do, but maybe I can be a Poet and an Artist one day.

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#god#hope#darkness#black#believe#fly#dear#pray#swim#pitch
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