Enamored * I want to live life happy; I want to live a happy life I don’t want to die, or commit suicide Though the thoughts may come, I will not succumb Because I love life, and I love my life A coward I am not Listen how hard my heart pumps, My blood Filling up my throat, full of love I am enamored, of all beautiful things known to all Of earth and water, wind and fire Of two blue skies, One that lets us in, The other that lets us fly Day or night, bright or not, My heart pumps furiously to the melody of life, One so happy that I have (I love this life, and would not change it, Only for my wife)
would it sound better if I used "..trade it" instead of "...change it"? Let me know.
Also, do you think one of the lines sounds offensive? Thanks, enjoy =)