Mar 2014
when my pride becomes unbearable
I coalesce into nothing.
I rush to You in love,
with courage to be vulnerable.
asking for help,
so I can live.
I coalesce into nothing.
I rush to You in love,
with courage to be vulnerable.
asking for help,
so I can live.
First line inspired by comment by r that pride was unbearable in response to first version of this poem. Thanks r. A whole new poem rose out of reworking the first line.
