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neth jones
Poems
Sep 26
echelon
'pup' is sad and so says
i point out a 'v' of exit geese against the sky
says he's not sad anymore and he's not
a child's power just like that
observation of my five yr old child
09/24
early haiku style versions -
1.
viewing the exit migration
of a v of geese
my child's sad mood goes
2.
exit migration
of an echelon of geese
my child's sad mood lifts
#autumn
#brevity
#fall
#short
#children
#geese
#migration
#moods
#sad
#happy
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neth jones
Montreal
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