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Verse 1 Hello toilet, my old friend I've got to go now once again I've been waiting for a great while This time I'm going the ex-tra mile With a force that few have ever known, Sheer will alone, I'm taking...the poop...enormous Verse 2 In truth it feels more than I can take I could pass out-and yes there's no mistake That this straining-it is as such Upon a mountain where lightning struck Where I felt the challenge May be well beyond my strength What it might take Attempting...the poop...enormous Verse 3 And in the end I can now feel This force of nature makes me reel Pushing a boulder of such great size Pushing a stone so big-one can't deny Making a log-giving it your all-one may survive Yes-in all my life As this was...the poop...enormous Verse 4 By my word-I feel-that this is it Upon this toilet throne I sit An overwhelming explosion from inside With no place in my mind left to hide As this was-unreal-yes, you can take my word, The gigantic...poop...enormous Verse 5 And my goal it now seems in sight I give it all with all my might In a strange vision this very moment As this an unreal bowel movement And soon I feel: Like the clear shaking in the earth That as making n' breaking waves I'm stunned and dazed From taking...the poop...enormous
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alan-s-bailey
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May 8, 2024
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(Sang to the tune of "The Sound of Silence" by Simon and Garfunkel)

I own nothing. Enjoy!

...well, nothing accept the world 'size of poop taken' record.

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