multiple weighty peach trees outlined grief's path lanceolate, broad, and pinnately veined leaves cornered my view of the clashing realities between faint rays and the celestial dome
my sweet cries and pleads set into the sky the atmospheric refraction distorts all that is left of her being an astronomical twilight will pass and the dusk will swallow her wavelength
wandering into a new medium surpassing the earth and as the sweet color of peaches decomposes becoming simple matter over time her sun has set and mine will follow shortly
i dislike the ending line
i've never experienced death, but it certainly feels like your world is ending. i wanted to convey death in a different way and I like sunsets and peaches so here we have this poem I do rather like it, but it's not perfect :)