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Carlo C Gomez
Poems
Feb 2020
Abandoned Shopping Mall
Entombed on the outskirts
of hero township
sits a once Arcadian jewel
turned relic
its vast wings spread
as an eagle
but the days of flight
long exhausted
sullen close-down signs and banners
hang minatory from
a fractured glass ceiling
-- a terminal remainder
spots of rain fall thru strewn wreckage
along the counters of a fossilized department store
inchworms journey down
the massive teeth of a frozen
escalator descended from
the empty heavens
creepy crawlers move about
remnants of a food court
in search of morsels
like the droves of
holiday shoppers
that once haunted this place
before betraying it
for the shiny new toy
across the highway
#shopping
#malls
#abandonment
#friendship
#aging
#nostalgia
#childhood
#memories
Written by
Carlo C Gomez
54/M/The Exclusion Zone
(54/M/The Exclusion Zone)
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