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golden hour

the road home wound and swirled like a coil

the music on the radio tuned out like white-noise

and the sun had set to a point where everything lit up in red

a crimson so deep

it stained the trees, the grass

the tall towering buildings, the calm suburban neighbourhoods

the cracked pavements, the dark alleyways

the glass shop windows, the exposed brick of an abandoned structure

the glossy sides of the cars that drove infront of us, the concrete we drove on

the faux leather seats, the metal of the adjustable headrest

the tips of my hair, the tips of my fingernails

my skin, and all of the things that sat with me in silence

 

i close my eyes

 

and i feel.

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Written by
lunartales
22 / F / on the moon
Published
Nov 17, 2019
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14·123
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other title: crimson hour

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#red#crimson#sun#sunset#drive#roadtrip#home#goldenhour#feeling#light
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