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Feb 24
Which version did you see
Was it improved
Did you see both
Could you notice a change

Should have just picked Draft
Wait 24 hours
Then Publish
Hmm, maybe a mistake

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I’ll change it back
No
This is good

Perfections not possible
Different for each person
For each moment
Go with the gut

Wait
This would be better
Edit
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MJL
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