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Nicole Dawn
Poems
Dec 2017
Spinning
A Shattered Family
*A Perfect Life
A Lovely Painting
A Deadly Knife
The words were echoing
Echoing
Just like before
Smudged Black Lipstick
Inhaling Black Smoke
Around and around we go
She blinked her eyes, her head unclear
When had the spinning come so near?
Black lipstick
Black smoke
A knife
A picture
A family here, a family gone
Spinning...
Stop. Stop. Stop.
She had lost her senses
Lost who she was
The world kept on spinning
When her mind suddenly stilled
Just trying to explain how my head feels, always open to criticism
#spinning
#lost
#confused
#control
#help
#alone
#dead
Written by
Nicole Dawn
Oklahoma
(Oklahoma)
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