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Portrait: mother

by girl-diffused

Sleek dark hair Highlights of auburn, color of fall Stern lips A look of austerity in the dark russet eye Skin lighter than my own The smaller wrist Large eyes Faint deepening crow's feet Nursing knowledge Small, short, slight, petite, and strong Maternal vanguard Matriarchal Beautiful and earthly Scorpionic elusiveness Her unused canvas Frequent Homegoods purchased Shifts decor in the livingroom like a Feng Shui practitioner Laughs at the absurdity of modern horror movies Smells like bath wash and too much perfume Smells of my childhood Smells of my innocence Paperbacks of Hugo and Austen in boxes in the basement Paperbacks of The Symposium and a biography of Marx in the basement Secretly likes to cook Culinary explorer Gastronomically open Culinary door opener Very little circle of friends Outspoken Austerity on the small mouth Austerity in the small mouth Conviction in her voice Soft graphite in her voice Has a lisp sometimes The slight overbite(?) Immigrant parent Unnaturalized citizen Reminds me of fall Reminds me of everything Reminds me of very little at once Life-teacher, one of many Protective Over-protective Pushy The way her hand moves on her tablet The way her voice sounded during a lecture when I was a child The way she used to hug Closet full of shoes and clothes she rummages through when she's going out Meticulous cleaner The way her voice sounded when she tried to make sense of me The way her voice sounds ...
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girl-diffused
29 / F / Earth
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Written by
girl-diffused
29 / F / Earth
Published
Oct 9, 2017
Lines·Words
52·242
Notes

List poetry. An experiment in profiling a close loved one.

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#list#poetry#close#relative#ambiguous#prose#traits
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