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Jun 2017
I Must Not Suggest You About Anything
Yes, Kalpana.
I shall not suggest you about anything,
Kri's the last one I suggested anything.
She got bored of following my advice,
But she still told me all her problems,
Yes, Kalpana.
Yes, Kalpana.
You know rest of the story involved,
How she did get rid of me in the end.
Initially she sought my advice,
She would follow it and be happy,
Because that was logical advice.
But sooner than later she got bored,
She still told me all of her problems,
She wanted not a solution suggested.
Slowly all the charm had worn out,
She grew repulsive to my words,
Ready to suffer she was than to follow my advice.
She was young,
At a crucial stage,
She made mistakes.
My HP Poem #1594
©Atul Kaushal
#teachings
#advice
#caution
#kri
#ego
#self
#respect
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33/M/Gòràkhpùr - Bháràŧ
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