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a collective perfection - double quantum loop poem

by GaryL

when no objective is best for our protection protecting ourselves would be the best direction directing ourselves toward a progressive connection connecting our minds to make a collective correction correcting the obsessions that infect our perception perceiving ourselves as the essence of conception conceiving a brand new perspective of reception receiving the blessing that we call perfection
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Written by
GaryL
54 / M / American
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Written by
GaryL
54 / M / American
Published
Oct 22, 2016
Time
1m
Notes

In a Quantum Loop poem, the last line of each stanza must be used as a different form of the word, as the first word in the following line. It also must rhyme, or nearly rhyme. Rhyme scheme can be any way you want it though. In a double quantum loop poem, the first word in lines 2, 3, and 4 must rhyme.

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#love#peace#humanity#perception#connected#brotherhood#collective
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