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Devin Ortiz
Poems
Oct 2016
Submerged
Hot Springs bubbles
Like acid melting my skin
Deep breathes dissolve away
Any memory of a physical being
I ponder this existence
Brought to a boil, in transience
Like magma, I am liqufied fire
Reaching out as far as I flow
Head first, nostrils flaring air
As it rushes up, I dive deep
The weightlessness of freedom
An expansion robbed in flesh
Narrow eyes surface at
The impending departure
To the land of the living
To the land of rotting
I stand frail as water drips
Down a tired composure
Only wishing to return
To the bed of lava beneath
#freedom
#mind
#water
#body
#spirit
#flesh
#weightless
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Devin Ortiz
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